Realigning a Dream
Realigning a Dream dreaming to believebelieving in a dreamshe sits upon a whisperdelicate truths her heartbeattomorrows hope her soul’s sanitycontent and certain she sitsand dreams in wait...
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Breathtaking write LR . Please share some more "old ones"cheersvic
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:).. always good to dream. Beautiful verse.. love the ending, Dan
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This is classic Rox ... which means it is fantastic! Love your final verses, especially. :)
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Those whispers are indeed dreamslayers, a lovely scribe with an inspiring light at the close.(And while you're reworking old ones redo mine I'm seeing all sorts of "OMG what happened to that line in...
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Rox, I love your take on the Lovers' Scrabble. Only literary master could've dreamed this beauty up and served it to the world. Dan
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You're such a Terrific Writer, Rox, Always have been... The whole poem is Masterful throughout, but those last 3 verses are Perfection in the light of truth and believing in oneself......
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Thanks everyone for indulging me this moment of flashback rhetoric! (((hugs)))
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Rox, this is genuine joy to read.The feelings that surf cleanly atop the waves of rolling emotions are crystal clear, love the use of the scrabble in this imaginitive creation.
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Rox... how lovely to be reading you... must say; she sits upon a whisper delicate truths her heartbeat tomorrows hope her soul’s sanity really stuck with me.... to even sit on a whisper; how beautiful...
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Miz Mirror's reflection of dreams, our brains trying desperately to make sense of the world. You come through with flying colors, Rox. Love all the comments as well.
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Raine, Loved the rise of those dreams once again,and this is very Clever..a lot of great lines!one among many I liked.."she falls from her whispered pedestalweighted down by a deceiving alphabet"Good...
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